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Thursday, May 10, 2007

Haiku Fun

Savage Chickens - Haiku Fun

And that, dear readers,
Marks another big milestone:
Six hundred cartoons!

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50 Comments:

At May 10, 2007 1:24 AM, Blogger onehugeeye said...

happy sixhudredth birthday

 
At May 10, 2007 1:36 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

second line has one
sylable too much. you should
count more carefully.

 
At May 10, 2007 2:07 AM, Blogger Janiv said...

That is very nice,
however, the second line
is a bit too long.

 
At May 10, 2007 2:36 AM, Blogger Cuidado said...

Congratulations on 600.

 
At May 10, 2007 4:05 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Doug don't worry about that second line, it's disputable. You know, poetic license and all.

 
At May 10, 2007 4:20 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

I dunno, the word "entire" could be only two syllables depending on the pronunciation. Methinks some people are nitpicky.

 
At May 10, 2007 4:39 AM, Anonymous ChickMeg95 said...

Happy Six Hundredth! May there be another 600! And more!

 
At May 10, 2007 5:06 AM, Anonymous Playtah said...

Happy 600! That's like, 4,200 in dog cartoons.

I don't mind about the second line....I like em' long. Er, wordy.

 
At May 10, 2007 5:38 AM, Anonymous rotts said...

Hey, anonymous,

"entire" consists of only

two syllables, man!

 
At May 10, 2007 5:52 AM, Anonymous Dennis said...

I am missing the 'extra sylable' point. I count seven. Haiku is 2 I think. So isn't entire. the count seems to be 2 1 1 2 1 which adds to 7.

 
At May 10, 2007 5:58 AM, Blogger WhizGidget said...

Congratulations
Six hundred, huge achievement
Keep up the great work!


Doug, you've done outstanding work - congratulations!

 
At May 10, 2007 6:04 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Congratulations!
May the chickens never die!
Regarding line two,

Check your sources, folks.
"Entire" has TWO syllables.
Look it up and see.

 
At May 10, 2007 6:14 AM, Blogger SeriousCat said...

woot, and may there be 600 nay, 6000 more.

 
At May 10, 2007 6:16 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

I must disagree.
"Entire" has two syllables.
Look it up right here.

 
At May 10, 2007 6:29 AM, Anonymous Log Lady said...

The second line is fine, since when does "entire" have 3 syllables? By the way: Congrats Doug!

 
At May 10, 2007 6:47 AM, Blogger Leigh said...

YAY! Congrats on the 600th! So how many hundreds of $$ does that mean you've sunk into Post-Its?

 
At May 10, 2007 6:51 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Only seventeen
Syllables in a haiku
Boop boop skidoo yah!

 
At May 10, 2007 7:03 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

AWESOME!!! 600 times you have made me laugh..chickens ROCK !!

 
At May 10, 2007 7:07 AM, Blogger Justin said...

the second is fine
if it is read as EN-TIRE
not as EN-TI-YER

 
At May 10, 2007 7:09 AM, Blogger Stacy said...

Fans are debating
Whether 'entire' has just two
syllables or three

 
At May 10, 2007 7:21 AM, Blogger Jim Pemberton said...

Let's see what I count:

hai(1) kus(2) for(3) the(4) en(5) tire(6) day(7)

This looks right to me.

 
At May 10, 2007 7:23 AM, Blogger Eileen said...

LOVE those SAVAGE CHICKENS!!!

the second line is FINE!

pronounce ENTIRE as 2 syllables!!!

 
At May 10, 2007 7:37 AM, Anonymous Lenpot said...

Erm...no...you are wrong
The second line is just right
You should count again

 
At May 10, 2007 7:50 AM, Blogger The McCords' said...

are you pronouncing entire...en-ti-er?

or...is it ha-i-ku?

 
At May 10, 2007 7:53 AM, Anonymous lioness said...

Sweet! Hope to see another 600!

 
At May 10, 2007 7:59 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

definition says
length of second line is fine
some people need lives

 
At May 10, 2007 8:02 AM, Anonymous caffeinatedpoet said...

One syllable off?
Only for a Southern drawl.
Speak a faster mile.

 
At May 10, 2007 8:03 AM, Blogger Allen said...

Syllables too much?
I only counted seven.
Does "haiku" have three?

 
At May 10, 2007 8:29 AM, Anonymous The Babe said...

I counted line two.
It has seven syllables.
Isn't that correct?

 
At May 10, 2007 8:48 AM, Blogger Dinana said...

Six hundred is a
Wonder, and a thousand is
even better! Thanks!

 
At May 10, 2007 9:03 AM, Blogger Talitha said...

the entire crowd spent
too much time analyzing
pronounciation.

 
At May 10, 2007 9:13 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

happy 600!
I really look forward to the sixty-sixth one after.

entire is 2 syllables - 3 sounds. tough call. technically correct but is it in the spirit of the poetry?
Then you have to remember that these are just chickens.
tasty tasty chickens...

 
At May 10, 2007 9:26 AM, Blogger belphebe said...

Even the nitpicks
are written in haiku form.
Bravo, everyone!

But, I heard Haiku
was not supposed to read like
a sentence. Correct?

 
At May 10, 2007 9:36 AM, Blogger aly said...

Congrats on making the 600 mark, Doug! I'm not going to pick apart your syllables, as long as you've got your chickens lined up. That is of far greater importance.

 
At May 10, 2007 11:14 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Haiku shmaiku why
who gives a damn when these fowl
are truly kickass.

 
At May 10, 2007 11:42 AM, Blogger Derek_Coleman said...

Awesome! Congrats on the big 600. Keep 'em coming. :)

 
At May 10, 2007 2:26 PM, Blogger The Freelance Cynic said...

600 Posts Doug?
I have so much to see then!
Spend a day reading

Too many Comments
In 17 syllables!
Till this one, where the last line was far too long...

 
At May 10, 2007 2:40 PM, Anonymous Ellie T said...

Yay! Happy 600 Doug. Although, I have to say some of your syllably-obssessed fans do scare me quite a bit. Haikus never fail to make me happy, though, mainly based on the fact that I can't make them. And I'd also like to say that the two people who did say that entire is three syllables were on at 1:36 AM or so. It was early in the morning.

I LOVE YOU DOUG!

 
At May 10, 2007 4:19 PM, Anonymous A new fan said...

Curse your comic lots
All six hundred in one day
I have read through.

((By the way, dear friends,
Haikus are not always
Five, seven, then five.

Though it may simply be
Due to translation issues,
The form is sometimes skewed.))

 
At May 10, 2007 4:54 PM, Anonymous M-L said...

five-seven-five form
myth though popularly true
limit seventeen


doug at 600
my heart beats a laugh each time.
smart, funny, hot? splash.

 
At May 10, 2007 7:56 PM, Anonymous Gail McCormick said...

congrats and keep chicken-ing

 
At May 10, 2007 11:03 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Hate to say it, but there is a part of haiku that people often forget/don't know, and this comic defiantly dosn't do it. The third line in a haiku is supposed to be an image of some sort.

 
At May 11, 2007 1:46 AM, Blogger Doug Savage said...

I love how only
the grammar-related 'toons
cause controversy!

Thanks for all the great comments everybody! You people are awesome.

 
At May 11, 2007 2:19 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

I think the debate about entire is funny. Especially because nobody is saying anything about Milestone being 2 or three syllables.

 
At May 11, 2007 7:23 AM, Anonymous caffeinatedpoet said...

Yeah, Doug, I agree. You seem to have a lot of obsessed English freaks (myself included) in your cult following. Apparently OCD grammarians also tend to have a fetish for SC. Keep up the awesomely witty cartoons! And thanks for giving our syntactic skills a workout!

To "anonymous" - For the record, I did stick up for "milestone" being 2 syllables.... Actually I felt like a complete idiot for doing that, only to see everyone else focusing so much on "entire." Regardless, SC are sheer genius. I think we can all agree on that.

 
At May 11, 2007 9:57 AM, Blogger Doug Savage said...

heheh and I'm very surprised that nobody caught that I used "haikus" when the actual plural is "haiku"! bwahahaha!

 
At May 12, 2007 10:20 AM, Anonymous padawan3000 said...

Excellent work, Doug
Haiku's suck at poetry
They should really die.

 
At May 12, 2007 1:52 PM, Anonymous Edric Hsu said...

That seemed pretty hard.
Until I tried it myself.
Now it's really fun!

 
At May 14, 2007 11:10 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Though other sources say otherwise, I personally disagree with the statement saying entire has two syllables. I say it has three (dictionaries be cursed).

Tire seems to be the point of contention, so I'll elaborate on that. I DON'T think that tire is pronounced tie-ree, but rather that it's often pronounced tie-er. Think of someone that ties stuff for a living. He's a tyer. And in my opinion, he's pronounced the same way as our mysterious tire. Though this may in fact be a mispronunciation, however, all the people I polled (a grand total of one household) did indeed pronouce it this way.

Thus, the word entire, with the addition of the syllable in front, makes for three syllables.

Also, Mr. Savage, I believe the plural of haiku being haiku wasn't caught was most likely due to the foreign origin of the word.

Best Regards,
Lord Glathil

Post Script: Further review of Merriam-Webster.com's entry for entire (along with the complementary audio pronunciation)leaves me to believe that entire is noted as having 3 syllables in the dictionary.

 
At May 14, 2007 11:12 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Savage Chickens Rock!
Keep Up The Terrific Job!
Happy Six Hundred!

(haikus are fun!)

 

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