Haiku Fun

May 10, 2007 · Filed Under Cartoons 

Savage Chickens - Haiku Fun

And that, dear readers,
Marks another big milestone:
Six hundred cartoons!

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50 Responses to “Haiku Fun”

  1. onehugeeye on May 10th, 2007 8:24 am

    happy sixhudredth birthday

  2. Anonymous on May 10th, 2007 8:36 am

    second line has one
    sylable too much. you should
    count more carefully.

  3. Janiv on May 10th, 2007 9:07 am

    That is very nice,
    however, the second line
    is a bit too long.

  4. Cuidado on May 10th, 2007 9:36 am

    Congratulations on 600.

  5. Anonymous on May 10th, 2007 11:05 am

    Doug don’t worry about that second line, it’s disputable. You know, poetic license and all.

  6. Anonymous on May 10th, 2007 11:20 am

    I dunno, the word “entire” could be only two syllables depending on the pronunciation. Methinks some people are nitpicky.

  7. ChickMeg95 on May 10th, 2007 11:39 am

    Happy Six Hundredth! May there be another 600! And more!

  8. Playtah on May 10th, 2007 12:06 pm

    Happy 600! That’s like, 4,200 in dog cartoons.

    I don’t mind about the second line….I like em’ long. Er, wordy.

  9. rotts on May 10th, 2007 12:38 pm

    Hey, anonymous,

    “entire” consists of only

    two syllables, man!

  10. Dennis on May 10th, 2007 12:52 pm

    I am missing the ‘extra sylable’ point. I count seven. Haiku is 2 I think. So isn’t entire. the count seems to be 2 1 1 2 1 which adds to 7.

  11. WhizGidget on May 10th, 2007 12:58 pm

    Congratulations
    Six hundred, huge achievement
    Keep up the great work!

    Doug, you’ve done outstanding work - congratulations!

  12. Anonymous on May 10th, 2007 1:04 pm

    Congratulations!
    May the chickens never die!
    Regarding line two,

    Check your sources, folks.
    “Entire” has TWO syllables.
    Look it up and see.

  13. SeriousCat on May 10th, 2007 1:14 pm

    woot, and may there be 600 nay, 6000 more.

  14. Anonymous on May 10th, 2007 1:16 pm

    I must disagree.
    “Entire” has two syllables.
    Look it up right here.

  15. Log Lady on May 10th, 2007 1:29 pm

    The second line is fine, since when does “entire” have 3 syllables? By the way: Congrats Doug!

  16. Leigh on May 10th, 2007 1:47 pm

    YAY! Congrats on the 600th! So how many hundreds of $$ does that mean you’ve sunk into Post-Its?

  17. Anonymous on May 10th, 2007 1:51 pm

    Only seventeen
    Syllables in a haiku
    Boop boop skidoo yah!

  18. Anonymous on May 10th, 2007 2:03 pm

    AWESOME!!! 600 times you have made me laugh..chickens ROCK !!

  19. Justin on May 10th, 2007 2:07 pm

    the second is fine
    if it is read as EN-TIRE
    not as EN-TI-YER

  20. Stacy on May 10th, 2007 2:09 pm

    Fans are debating
    Whether ‘entire’ has just two
    syllables or three

  21. Jim Pemberton on May 10th, 2007 2:21 pm

    Let’s see what I count:

    hai(1) kus(2) for(3) the(4) en(5) tire(6) day(7)

    This looks right to me.

  22. Eileen on May 10th, 2007 2:23 pm

    LOVE those SAVAGE CHICKENS!!!

    the second line is FINE!

    pronounce ENTIRE as 2 syllables!!!

  23. Lenpot on May 10th, 2007 2:37 pm

    Erm…no…you are wrong
    The second line is just right
    You should count again

  24. The McCords' on May 10th, 2007 2:50 pm

    are you pronouncing entire…en-ti-er?

    or…is it ha-i-ku?

  25. lioness on May 10th, 2007 2:53 pm

    Sweet! Hope to see another 600!

  26. Anonymous on May 10th, 2007 2:59 pm

    definition says
    length of second line is fine
    some people need lives

  27. caffeinatedpoet on May 10th, 2007 3:02 pm

    One syllable off?
    Only for a Southern drawl.
    Speak a faster mile.

  28. Allen on May 10th, 2007 3:03 pm

    Syllables too much?
    I only counted seven.
    Does “haiku” have three?

  29. The Babe on May 10th, 2007 3:29 pm

    I counted line two.
    It has seven syllables.
    Isn’t that correct?

  30. Dinana on May 10th, 2007 3:48 pm

    Six hundred is a
    Wonder, and a thousand is
    even better! Thanks!

  31. Talitha on May 10th, 2007 4:03 pm

    the entire crowd spent
    too much time analyzing
    pronounciation.

  32. Anonymous on May 10th, 2007 4:13 pm

    happy 600!
    I really look forward to the sixty-sixth one after.

    entire is 2 syllables - 3 sounds. tough call. technically correct but is it in the spirit of the poetry?
    Then you have to remember that these are just chickens.
    tasty tasty chickens…

  33. belphebe on May 10th, 2007 4:26 pm

    Even the nitpicks
    are written in haiku form.
    Bravo, everyone!

    But, I heard Haiku
    was not supposed to read like
    a sentence. Correct?

  34. aly on May 10th, 2007 4:36 pm

    Congrats on making the 600 mark, Doug! I’m not going to pick apart your syllables, as long as you’ve got your chickens lined up. That is of far greater importance.

  35. Anonymous on May 10th, 2007 6:14 pm

    Haiku shmaiku why
    who gives a damn when these fowl
    are truly kickass.

  36. Derek_Coleman on May 10th, 2007 6:42 pm

    Awesome! Congrats on the big 600. Keep ‘em coming. :)

  37. The Freelance Cynic on May 10th, 2007 9:26 pm

    600 Posts Doug?
    I have so much to see then!
    Spend a day reading

    Too many Comments
    In 17 syllables!
    Till this one, where the last line was far too long…

  38. Ellie T on May 10th, 2007 9:40 pm

    Yay! Happy 600 Doug. Although, I have to say some of your syllably-obssessed fans do scare me quite a bit. Haikus never fail to make me happy, though, mainly based on the fact that I can’t make them. And I’d also like to say that the two people who did say that entire is three syllables were on at 1:36 AM or so. It was early in the morning.

    I LOVE YOU DOUG!

  39. A new fan on May 10th, 2007 11:19 pm

    Curse your comic lots
    All six hundred in one day
    I have read through.

    ((By the way, dear friends,
    Haikus are not always
    Five, seven, then five.

    Though it may simply be
    Due to translation issues,
    The form is sometimes skewed.))

  40. M-L on May 10th, 2007 11:54 pm

    five-seven-five form
    myth though popularly true
    limit seventeen

    doug at 600
    my heart beats a laugh each time.
    smart, funny, hot? splash.

  41. Gail McCormick on May 11th, 2007 2:56 am

    congrats and keep chicken-ing

  42. Anonymous on May 11th, 2007 6:03 am

    Hate to say it, but there is a part of haiku that people often forget/don’t know, and this comic defiantly dosn’t do it. The third line in a haiku is supposed to be an image of some sort.

  43. Doug Savage on May 11th, 2007 8:46 am

    I love how only
    the grammar-related ‘toons
    cause controversy!

    Thanks for all the great comments everybody! You people are awesome.

  44. Anonymous on May 11th, 2007 9:19 am

    I think the debate about entire is funny. Especially because nobody is saying anything about Milestone being 2 or three syllables.

  45. caffeinatedpoet on May 11th, 2007 2:23 pm

    Yeah, Doug, I agree. You seem to have a lot of obsessed English freaks (myself included) in your cult following. Apparently OCD grammarians also tend to have a fetish for SC. Keep up the awesomely witty cartoons! And thanks for giving our syntactic skills a workout!

    To “anonymous” - For the record, I did stick up for “milestone” being 2 syllables…. Actually I felt like a complete idiot for doing that, only to see everyone else focusing so much on “entire.” Regardless, SC are sheer genius. I think we can all agree on that.

  46. Doug Savage on May 11th, 2007 4:57 pm

    heheh and I’m very surprised that nobody caught that I used “haikus” when the actual plural is “haiku”! bwahahaha!

  47. padawan3000 on May 12th, 2007 5:20 pm

    Excellent work, Doug
    Haiku’s suck at poetry
    They should really die.

  48. Edric Hsu on May 12th, 2007 8:52 pm

    That seemed pretty hard.
    Until I tried it myself.
    Now it’s really fun!

  49. Anonymous on May 14th, 2007 6:10 pm

    Though other sources say otherwise, I personally disagree with the statement saying entire has two syllables. I say it has three (dictionaries be cursed).

    Tire seems to be the point of contention, so I’ll elaborate on that. I DON’T think that tire is pronounced tie-ree, but rather that it’s often pronounced tie-er. Think of someone that ties stuff for a living. He’s a tyer. And in my opinion, he’s pronounced the same way as our mysterious tire. Though this may in fact be a mispronunciation, however, all the people I polled (a grand total of one household) did indeed pronouce it this way.

    Thus, the word entire, with the addition of the syllable in front, makes for three syllables.

    Also, Mr. Savage, I believe the plural of haiku being haiku wasn’t caught was most likely due to the foreign origin of the word.

    Best Regards,
    Lord Glathil

    Post Script: Further review of Merriam-Webster.com’s entry for entire (along with the complementary audio pronunciation)leaves me to believe that entire is noted as having 3 syllables in the dictionary.

  50. Anonymous on May 14th, 2007 6:12 pm

    Savage Chickens Rock!
    Keep Up The Terrific Job!
    Happy Six Hundred!

    (haikus are fun!)

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